Hannah, I like how you changed from your previous elevator pitch and showed different examples of your shoes and how you plan to reach a bigger audience and satisfying more customers. This is insightful because you are showing your plan to expand your business. Good job.
Hey Hannah, I like how you included examples of previous orders within your elevator pitch, this is great for showing potential investors a real world example of what your business entails. Another benefit of showing examples is that we get to see the incredibly high quality of the work, which makes this business even more appealing for both customers and potential investors.
Hey Hannah, You did a wonderful job on your second elevator pitch for this course. I really liked how you included examples and showed off some of your shoes. This is simply a really smart strategy for potential investors and/or buyers. Overall, you did a really good job with this presentation.
Hannah,
ReplyDeleteI like how you changed from your previous elevator pitch and showed different examples of your shoes and how you plan to reach a bigger audience and satisfying more customers. This is insightful because you are showing your plan to expand your business. Good job.
Hey Hannah, I like how you included examples of previous orders within your elevator pitch, this is great for showing potential investors a real world example of what your business entails. Another benefit of showing examples is that we get to see the incredibly high quality of the work, which makes this business even more appealing for both customers and potential investors.
ReplyDeleteHey Hannah,
ReplyDeleteYou did a wonderful job on your second elevator pitch for this course. I really liked how you included examples and showed off some of your shoes. This is simply a really smart strategy for potential investors and/or buyers. Overall, you did a really good job with this presentation.